2 new couplets
Aaah happy day wrote after a long time. Pretty decent ones too.
Do lafzon me simta hai aatish-e-sansaar
ik gham-e-ishq dooja gham-e-rozgaar
Aatish's world is defined complete with two phrases
One the sorrow of love the other the sorrow of making a living
humsaaya-e-asmaan ko lambi faakon ka dar nahi
dum bharta hai shahbaaz par shikasta'par nahi
The fellow traveler of the sky is not intimidated by long periods of hunger
The Royal Falcon has paused to take a breath but its wings are not clipped yet
(a falcon hunts for days sometimes weeks to make a kill, sometimes shadowing a single prey)
2 Comments:
No Kidding! Is this original???? Very very profound and inspiring - the falcon bit!
Of course its original else I would have made sure to give attribution.
Thanks for the appreciation.
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